Thursday’s
class was a great class. I enjoyed the “I am from” readings. I especially enjoyed learning a little bit more about
Mrs. Bradshaw. Next, Mrs. Bradshaw talked about the six traits in writing. They are: Good Organization, Sound Ideas, Powerful
Words, Correct Connections, Smooth Fluency, and Individual Voice.
Mrs. Bradshaw
then read a former student’s story. She informed the students, UNM students as well, that after she was finished that
we were going to rate this student’s paper. When she was done she projected a rating scale on the overhead. We went
through the organization of the paper. We also reviewed the ideas of the paper and the words and fluency of the paper. I enjoyed
watching Mrs. Bradshaw’s students as they rated this paper. I think that it was great for them to see how their own
papers will be viewed.
The best part
of the day was seeing the students that I worked with last week. One of the girls was excited when I walked into the classroom.
She waved at me when I walked in and waved goodbye to me as I left. It made me feel good as she was the one that I talked
most about in my last posting, and made the most impression on me. I was happy to see that I had made an impression on her
as well.